Weekend Writing Warriors #2

wewriwa_square_4Weekend Writing Warriors is a writing blog hop where writers share eight sentences from their WIP each week, hosted here. Make sure to stop by their website if you’d like to join us. And check out the other great writers who’re showing their work as well!

 

Excerpt from Vermillion Bird of the South:

*This is a continuation of the one from last week, so if you want to read that one, click here*

 

 

 

~~~~

Rage filled Mill’s expression. “Don’t… don’t…” He threw the glass across the room, and it shattered against the wall, splattering it with rum. He sputtered a bit, but had nothing to say, so with a huff, he shoveled the rest of the food in his mouth.

The rest of the meal went pretty much like that, and until Zak and Mill left, allowing us to finally eat. I tried to ignore the constant feeling of Zak’s eyes on me. Watching me. The minute they were both out of sight, Ember filled a plate with leftovers and handed it over to me.

~~~

 

I think this part is pretty ‘meh’ right now, but I wanted to give all you a chance to read this ( though it’s still heavily in the WIP/early draft stages. )

Let me know what you think~

 

 

Advertisements

10 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Warriors #2

    • Thank you~ This is an earlier draft so I’m not focusing on word choice as much. But I’ll defintiely keep an eye on the “me”. Those and “I” tend to get a bit out of control at times.

      Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s